During my revision process, I was able to go back into the text to strengthen my naysayer. I also went back through to add more detail to areas that were vague and needed explanation. I spent most of the sixty minutes of revision by going through my sources and looking for more evidence that would support my claims. I was able to pull two more pieces of evidence after going through the sources. One was to support my claim and one was to strengthen the naysayer. Overall, most of my revision process was reading through the sources and explaining my claims with more detail.